- "be it in" awkward language - ! Suggest starting by giving a (brief!) sentence about the "what people say" aspects of understanding, so that people know what you're distinguishing against. - "At the same time, humans do not" is awk transition, because it suggests that "keywords" occur /in opposition to/ what you say in the first paragraph. Suggest the following sentiment: "When humans analyze rhetorical purpose, they do so deeply, not merely relying on the presence/absence of key words". - Fig 1 caption could benefit from a concrete example of what a hypothesis looks like. ("e.g. that the author's word choice suggests blame for a particular group.") - +In this abstract, I describe+ "The RASHI system is a computational model of this human ability. It recognizes and syst..." Suggest this so as to explicitly connect RASHI to the previous paragraph about what humans do. - Decisions/choices spade. - Summarized hypothesis? maybe "forms a hypothesis of the author's overall intent which it describes to the user as a textual brief/summary." - to shorten: "complex nested representations, all of which involve humanly-plausible operations." - As a first step -> In the first step (stylistic prefrence) - comprised of -> composed of (though there's evolving usage) - "simple English, for example the following news story titled" - [The typeface switching is a presumably temporary visual crime. I suggest using color instead, or not having running threads throughout---they might be more effective in speaking.] - "RASHI processes the textual input using the START parser, yielding hierarchical semantic parses." - "This inner language allows ... presence in the text" could be made more clear. Perhaps something about taking into account subject/object roles in the sentence. - to find instances of -> to collect all potentially meaningful cues about [style] - At this stage, RASHI ... -> At this stage, potential evidence is merely collected, not evaluated. The collected evidence is assembled into a /composition story/ for further processing. - from the above excerpt -> with the above excerpt [stylistic] - "it must interpret it as indicative of the author’s intention to modulate meaning." is a little awk. Suggest "After gathering textual evidence, RASHI must evaluate which evidence indicates the author's intent." - "subjectivity model, a natural language" - !! following elaboration graph goes missing. Better to say "generates the elaboration graph shown in Fig 4." What's an elaboration graph? - As the last step -> Having determined the significance of the evidence, RASHI must distill potentially conflicting cues to get an overall portrait of authorial intent. [The key is describing the conflict-resolution] - Maybe add a line like "RASHI counts various instances for or against individuals in the story, then uses a hand-coded decision tree to yield its final summary of authorial intent."